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Day in Riccarton.
It was a cold Christchurch morning and I got woken by a beast. A ginger hairy beast. I got up, it was my cat. I got up and got dressed then we left. By the time Mum, Kalem and Keeva got dressed it was lunchtime. We went over to $2 rice but it was closed for repairs. So went to McDonalds I got a chicken, Kalem had a Big mac so did Mum. Then we walked to Timezone and got $20 put on our cards I went straight to deal or no deal. I got 50 tickets. After that went to the front desk they said I have 572 tickets I have been saving for ages. Then I bought some lollies then we went home and ate them.
Have you been to timezone?
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