Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 2 August 2019
Wild animals!
Here is my Giraffe slide hope you like it.
Do you like Giraffes?
4 comments:
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I like your Giraffes slides because all of your pics look cool and it makes it look better.
ReplyDeletebut next time you could go over your slides to see if theres a word that right.There are very cute pics of Giraffes.
good job you have good pictures. You have good descriptive words. You also have a good DLO. Next time you should go over some of your words so that it makes sense.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment Charlotte I will make sure it makes sense
DeleteThanks for the comment Katelyn next time I will make sure I check the spelling.
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