Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 26 May 2020
Marvellous Mary.
For RE today we needed to make a DLO about facts about Mary here is mine.
Here is my attempt of drawing Mary.
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Hi Arnaika,
ReplyDeleteThank you for posting your work to your blog. I like how you have spread your facts about Mary on the drawing so it isn't very cramped. Next time, I would like to see you add a bit more to your drawing as it is very plain. Maybe you could add a bigger title so it stands out or put your facts in shapes with a coloured boarder.
I really love your attempt at Mary. You have done a great job and it looks much better than what I could do.
Keep up the great work!