Today we had to do a mind map about Alex Rider here is my mind map.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 3 June 2020
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Today we had to do a mind map about Alex Rider here is my mind map.
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Hi Arnaika, thank you for sharing your work to your blog. I like how you have added your facts about Alex though I feel like you could have added in more detail into your facts. For example, you have told me got shot. Where did he get shot and why? Why did his uncle die or how? How has that affected him?
ReplyDeleteI would also like to know about what Alex looks like. You haven't told me about what he looks like.
Hi Arnkia,
ReplyDeleteI really like your art work!
I like the facts you put about Alex Rider!
Next time could you put 2 or 3 sectences with the facts?